Massively improved. The smaller type is very strong. It is much stronger than the Large type at the beginning. As a test it is brilliant. I will sit down with you on Tuesday and talk in much more detail but for now consider making a version of this with a much more commercial feel. Or keep this as is and make a series of shorter films that would, hypothetically, play after this to inform the viewer.
Great work, with some new and fresh typographic elements. Well done.
Massively improved. The smaller type is very strong. It is much stronger than the Large type at the beginning. As a test it is brilliant. I will sit down with you on Tuesday and talk in much more detail but for now consider making a version of this with a much more commercial feel. Or keep this as is and make a series of shorter films that would, hypothetically, play after this to inform the viewer.
ReplyDeleteGreat work, with some new and fresh typographic elements. Well done.
PS yes I really like the film and yes I really like the idea of the window panels...
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